[Volunteers] meeting.shtml edits

Rick Moen rick at linuxmafia.com
Fri Dec 2 19:21:57 PST 2005


I wrote:

> 2.  Existing phrase 
>        This month we'll have multiple short presentations [...]   
> 
> Sentence would be improved by putting a comma after that phrase, as it
> is parenthetical.

I meant, after the phase "This month".





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